Answers
to Exercises
More Adjectives and Adverbs,
pp. 224-25
What if my answers are
correct?
If you find that all your
answers match these, then the skills or processes you use for spelling
are satisfactory. Congratulations!
What if my answers are
incorrect?
If you find that some of
your answers don't match these, do not worry. There are many ways
to do these sentence combining exercises, some better than others.
Re-read about the six qualities listed on p. 223: meaning, clarity,
coherence,
emphasis,
conciseness,
and rhythm. If your sentences are different from the sentences
here, check to see how your versions measure up to those qualities.
As you look at your own answers, ask yourself the questions that you find
with those six qualities.
Answers to Sentence Building Exercise on p. 224
Martha waited patiently on her front porch. She wore a plain, white bonnet and a long calico dress. She watched the sun sink beyond the empty fields. The she watched the thin, white light in the distant sky. She listened carefully for the soft, familiar sound. Suddenly, a long silver ship descended through the warm evening air. Martha calmly picked up her small, black purse. The shiny spaceship landed smoothly in the empty field. Slowly and Gracefully, Martha walked toward the ship. Minutes later, the field was dark, silent, and empty again.