What if my answers are
correct? If you find that all your
answers match these, then your knowledge of and skills with adverb clauses
are satisfactory. Congratulations!
What if my answers to
the sentence building exercises are incorrect? If you find that some of
your answers don't match these exactly, do not worry. There are many
ways to do these sentence combining exercises, some better than others.
Re-read the six qualities listed on p. 223: meaning, clarity,
coherence,
emphasis,
conciseness,
and rhythm. If your sentences are different from the sentences
below, check to see how your versions measure up to the qualities on p.
223. As you look at your own answers, ask yourself the questions
that you find with those six qualities.
Answers to Identifying Adverb Clauses
Exercise on p. 247 The adverb clauses are underlined,
and the key words are highlighted in blue.
You can register for the course
in demonology if you first obtain the permission
of the professor.
You can register for the course
in demonology, but you must first obtain the
permission of the professor. (But
is a coordinating conjunction, a.k.a. one of the fanboys, listed in Keywords
#2. The two clauses in this sentence are “coordinated.”)
Cinderella left the reception
early because she was tired.
Wherever
you go, I
will follow.
Although
the forest looks peaceful,
it supports incessant warfare.
We gave away our dog so
that we could get some sleep at night.
Answers to Sentence Building Exercise on
p. 247-48 Answers will vary.
It is unlikely that Cleopatra
actually committed suicide with an asp because
the species is unknown in Egypt.
(Another possibility is
since.)
On a hot mid-August evening,
my parents and I watched in awe as erratic
bolts of lightning from a distant storm illuminated the sky.
(You may have used when,
while,
or after.)
Although
women are ill more frequently than men, they recover from illnesses more
easily and more frequently than men.
(You could also use though
or even though.)
Natural rubber is used chiefly
to make tires and inner tubes because it is
cheaper than synthetic rubber and has greater resistance to tearing when
wet.
By ancient custom, when a Peruvian
woman finds an unusually ugly potato, she runs up to the nearest man and
smashes it in his face.
(Perhaps you used if,
once,
or as soon as to join these clauses
together.)
One scarcely ever sees a sailboat
or a hardy swimmer in these icy waters, though
one does occasionally spot a seal, an otter, or a sperm whale.
Answers to Paragraph Building Exercise
on p. 249 Compare what you wrote to
the original paragraph from which the details were taken. You will
find the original paragraph on p. 415 in the text book. Answers will
vary.