Answers
to Exercises
Fragments, pp. 278-
What if my answers are
correct?
If you find that all your answers match these, then your ability to
identify and fix fragments is satisfactory. Congratulations!
What if my answers are
incorrect?
If you find that not all your answers match these, then try to figure
out which sentence structures or patterns are confusing you and leading
you astray. If you can figure out what you are "not" seeing (for
example, prehaps you are having difficulty determing if a set of words
has both a subject and a verb), you are halfway to knowing what to look
for. You might want to work with a tutor in the Writing Lab to learn
some alternative tricks for identifying and fixing run-ons (comma splices
and fused sentences).
Answers to Exercise on Recognizing Run-On
Sentences, p. 278
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Answers to Exercise on Correcting a Run-On
with a Period or Semicolon, pp. 279-80
Answers to part “a” should look similar to these, but answers to part
“b” will vary.
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Fifty years ago parents were apt to have a lot of kids. Nowadays
kids are apt to have a lot of parents.
or
Fifty years ago parents were apt to have a lot of kids; nowadays
kids are apt to have a lot of parents.
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A low blood-sugar level signals hunger. A higher one tells
the brain that you don’t need to eat.
or
A low blood-sugar level signals hunger; a higher one tells the
brain that you don’t need to eat.
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A lobotomy is a fairly simple operation. However amateurs
should not attempt it.
or
A lobotomy is a fairly simple operation; however amateurs should
not attempt it.
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Mrs. Barbee never missed a day of school. I think even the
flu and the common cold were afraid of that lady.
or
Mrs. Barbee never missed a day of school; I think even the flu
and the common cold were afraid of that lady.
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Black magic is intended to harm or destroy. White magic is
intended to benefit the community or an individual.
or
Black magic is intended to harm or destroy; white magic is intended
to benefit the community or an individual.
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A jump rope is the ultimate aerobic exercise. It provides
a top-notch daily workout for those without orthopedic or cardiovascular
problems.
or
A jump rope is the ultimate aerobic exercise; it provides a
top-notch daily workout for those without orthopedic or cardiovascular
problems.
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Open the can of soup carefully and be sure not to cut your fingers.
Empty the contents of the can into the pot.
or
Open the can of soup carefully and be sure not to cut your fingers;
empty the contents of the can into the pot.
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It’s not enough to hear opportunity knock. You must let him
in, greet him, make friends, and work together with him.
or
It’s not enough to hear opportunity knock; you must let him
in, greet him, make friends, and work together with him.
Answers to Exercise on Correcting
Run-ons, p. 281-83
Answers may vary somewhat.
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(a) Most smoke detectors have a test button,
but this button may test only the sounding device and not the
working components.
(b) Although most smoke detectors have
a test button, this button may test only the sounding device and
not the working components.
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(a) Sunlight flooded the room, and
the pianos, all black, gleamed.
(b) Sunlight flooded the room; the pianos, all black,
gleamed.
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(a) We walked back to the big house, which
had been built by my great-grandfather almost a century ago.
(b) We walked back to the big house built
by my great-grandfather almost a century ago.
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(a) I gave your paycheck to Butch, who
told me you had sent him.
(b) I gave your paycheck to Butch because
he told me you had sent him.
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(coordination) Don’t carry your house keys
in your wallet, for a pickpocket then
has easy access to your house.
(adverb clause) Don’t carry your house
keys in your wallet because a pickpocket then has
easy access to your house.
(semicolon) Don’t carry your house keys in your wallet; a pickpocket
then has easy access to your house.
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(semicolon) The gardens are dry; the road to the shore is dusty.
(adverb clause) When
the gardens are dry, the road to the shore is dusty.
(coordination) The gardens are dry,
and the road to the shore is dusty.
(semicolon and transition) The gardens
are dry; likewise, the road to the
shore is dusty.
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(period) Nobody knows for certain how many games Bull Cyclone won.
The best detective efforts put his record at 97-62-3.
(coordination) Nobody knows for certain
how many games Bull Cyclone won, but
the best detective efforts put his record at 97-62-3.
(semicolon and transition) Nobody knows
for certain how many games Bull Cyclone won; however,
the best detective efforts put his record at 97-62-3.
(adverb clause) Though
nobody knows for certain how many games Bull Cyclone won, the best
detective efforts put his record at 97-62-3.
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(semicolon) For most of the passengers, the trip ended on a note of gloom;
for me, it ended on a note of triumph.
(semicolon and transition) For most of
the passengers, the trip ended on a note of gloom;
however, for me, it ended on a note of triumph.
(adverb clause) For most of the passengers,
the trip ended on a note of gloom though for me,
it ended on a note of triumph.
(adjective clause) For me, the trip, which
for most of the passengers ended on a note of gloom, ended on a
note of triumph.
(participle phrase) Ending
on a note of gloom for most of the passengers, the trip ended on
a note of triumph for me.
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