ANSWERS: Compare your answers to the ones typed
below. Read each one carefully.
Running through
the woods one snowy morning, it was unbelievably
cold. (This sentence does not tell us who was running.)
Incorrect fix: While
running through the woods one snowy morning, it
was unbelievably cold. (This sentence still does not tell
us who was running.)
Fixed by changing the participle phrase to
and adverb clasue: As Jacob ran through the
woods one snowy morning, it was unbelievably cold.
Fixed by putting the appropriate noun after
the comma and rewriting the main clause: Running
through the woods one snowy morning, Jacob was not
discouraged by the unbelievably cold weather.
Hearing her name called over the loud speaker,
what
a surprise to find out Frannie had won the raffle! (This sentence
does not tell us who heard her name called out.)
Fixed by putting the appropriate noun after
the comma and rewriting the main clause: Hearing her name called over the
loud speaker, Frannie was surprised to find out
she had won the raffle!
or
Hearing Frannie's
name called over the loud speaker, the townspeople
were surprised to find out that she had won the raffle!